Blackwell Forest Preserve Commerical - ID# 17
Wheaton North
Commercial
Entry Description
This commercial promotes a local forest preserve in Wheaton. I made this commercial to spread global ecological awareness and support for nature preserves. The music is from GMP, for which my school has purchased a license.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/29 8:18 am - What I Loved: Beautiful use of moving shots. Most of your pans were steady and smooth. I like how you showcased so many aspects of the park- lake, trails, floral. The music was also calming and peaceful which is what we want when we experience nature. Areas of Growth: I would have loved to have seen some shots of people enjoying the park. Think about your target audience and showing them in the video! Is this targeted towards families? Show some families enjoying a walk or a picnic! I would have also liked some additional information on this park about the facilities available. A vocal narration track could be beneficial in a project like this to tell us about what's available!
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