Chocolate Chip Cookies - ID# 177
Wheaton Academy
Demonstration
Entry Description
A unique look for how to make chocolate chip cookies
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/27 10:27 am - Good video with some surprising comedic tidbits in there!. You have a good variance in camera composition and the shots connect well. The editing was really well done. The background music could use a little boost. Overall it was easy to follow steps with good voiceover.
- 4/26 9:03 am - I like the humorous elements! They are engaging. Some fun effects. 2 sticks of butter does not equal 2cups of butter (it would only be one cup). Joke at 1:22 a bit garbled–hard to catch the first time. Some visuals could be cleaner.
- 4/24 5:20 pm - Works Well - Very funny twist on a common recipe and format. Good shot composition. Well-paced and smooth editing. Clever script. Needs Work - Could be possibly confusing to someone who’s new to baking. Color temperature of the Hershey bar shot doesn’t match the rest.
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Judge 2
Positives: Added human helped story. Good storyline. Visuals helped.
Improvements: Lighting dark. Hard to see details. Narrator spoke very quickly and hard to get all of the message.
Judge 3
Positives: Good B-roll at the start of the video. I like the joke about packing the brown sugar. Good dad joke. Good job editing the throwing into the bowl shot for the eggs and the chocolate chips. I like the wide variety of shots that you offer the viewer. Great job on this video
Improvements: Watch going from echo audio (kitchen) to voice-over audio. It can be distracting. Some of the edits jump a bit. Make sure that you keep the pan in the same spot for the edits.
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