Florence by Mills - ID# 172
Wheaton Academy
Commercial
Entry Description
Florence by Mills makeup products - helping to give confidence back
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- 4/29 8:23 am - What I Loved: I love how you opened this project by justifying the need to take care of our faces because of mask wearing. This was a great lead into your commercial and hooked me in! You provided great close up's of each of the products being talked about. The vocal energy in your voice over was outstanding. You did excellent work telling us about this product in a clear and confident way! Areas of Growth: I liked the focus on products that help with skin care due to masks- I am not sure if you need to show or mention the make up products, in addition to the skin care products. I would rather see more of the face masks and pimple patches over the eye shadow if the focus in on preventing acne due to masks. Some of your shots are a little shaky- be sure to use a tripod while filming the close up's of your products. Near the end of your project, your vocal narration was a little soft compared to your music. I would make sure you balance these out so you remain easy to hear!
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