MMEA Fest

There is only one brand of golf shoes that will give you the comfort and performance you want - Footjoy

4/28 8:04 am - What I Loved: I loved seeing these shoes in action in your commercial! You provided a nice variety of wide and close up shots that helped to showcase this product. I had a clear idea of what these shoes were and what they looked like! Your voice over was engaging and I could tell that you were genuinely passionate about using and selling this product. The part in which your little sister enters the scene was also pretty funny. Areas of Growth: One thing I would work on is aligning your b-roll to your voice over track. For example, when talking about having a great gold game, I wanted to see you actually hit the golf ball in the hole and not miss! When talking about the 3 different colors of your shoes, I wanted to see those options! When sharing the website for buying these shoes, it might also be helpful to put a link to the website in text or qr code form on the screen so that your viewers can easily access the store. The shot with your little sister is also very shaky and a little distracting. Don't forget to use a tripod here.

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