Stamped Community-Wide Event - ID# 187
Metea Valley
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- 4/29 8:41 am - This is an interesting story choice and compelling. It felt like there was an info dump to start this story. I also worry about that opening soundbite where he says he is kind of silly. It feels like that takes away from the subject (shows more about this guy) but I think the focus of this story was the book and the impact, not on how interesting this author might be.
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