Jealousy Jealousy - ID# 194
Wheaton Academy
Music Video
Entry Description
This music video attempts to show the challenges of social media on our teenage culture. While fighting the urge of jealousy and the desire for coveting, this individual ends up creating her own following.
Copyright Info
Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/28 3:49 pm - This was SO fun. Loved this so much. The pacing, the storyline, the framing, the editing.... 10/10!!!
- 4/7 1:20 pm - A+ work. Excellent shots, excellent edit. Excellent and creative interpretation of the song! Loved it!
Judge 1
Positives: The story moves well.There is some terrific editing and it's clear that there is a defined and effective editing rhythm.
Improvements: The piece needs a color grade so it more visual consistent in terms of color. The disaffection of the performers needs variation and development.
Judge 2
Positives: Really strong and clear message. Committed actors. Excellent structure, with editing that built to a progression and climax. Fantastic compositing. Love what you did with your colored lights and projection onto your actors.
Improvements: Pay more attention in the future to finishing. What codec did you export out to? Does it match where you're hosting (youtube, I think)? Your video was pixelated and had 2000-era buffering issues, and the resolution was bad in a lot of spots, when some phone cameras can shoot at 4k. I dinged you on editing here, otherwise would have gotten 100.
Judge 3
Positives: this video was fantastic. Great visuals that really kept the story going. A wide variety of visuals and editing styles and even the effects made this impossible to tune out.
Improvements: The photography was effective but could have been even better. With more attention to lighting and blocking some of the shots could have said more. Didn't need the names at the end but I did like how it became a post and created a nice bookend for the finish.
Judge 4
Positives:
Improvements: