Stand Up - ID# 195

Glenbrook North

Public Service Announcement

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Entry Description

PSA warning people about what happens when you sit too much. It's time to stand.

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Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/5 4:25 pm - Your topic and message are relevant and you include information (the effects of sitting too much) that is important for the audience to see. Your call to action was simple and effective. I would have liked to have heard something more than the ticking clock and to seen more of a connection to when to stand, when to give yourself that nudge to get up. Even if maybe there was a ringing that signaled it was time to stand up? And also, possibly, more locations. Still having the subject sitting in the same framing, but showing different environments.

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