Magic Box - ID# 234
Homewood-Flossmoor
Commercial
Entry Description
A commercial that introduces a box with magical powers to turn inanimate objects to real life in order to help kids interact with others and not sit around bored.
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- 4/27 11:20 am - What I Loved: This was a funny and creative product and I love how you have "thought outside the box" to create something original! Since this is a new product no one has heard of, you also did a great job explaining how this works! This is essential when marketing something new. Your VO tone was engaging and upbeat and was combined well with your music. Areas of Growth: Next time, I would love to hear some of the natural audio that is occurring in your scene. For example, when you open the box to reveal a real life dog, I would love to hear the dog barking or the boy gasping in excitement. This will help to transport your viewers into the scene and keep them more engaged in your commercial. Your closing text also looks very formal for the type of product this is! Next time, I would design text that is less formal and maybe even more silly :) This was great storytelling and innovative! Keep up the great work!
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