Alcohol Poisoning PSA - ID# 233

Homewood-Flossmoor

Public Service Announcement

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Entry Description

A Public Service Announcement on how the amount of shots effects your body.

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Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/6 12:50 pm - Your topic was poignant, and having the visual of the shots worked. The music brought it together well. There was something about the phrasing of some of the statements that felt off, grammatically. It worked for some (After 6 shots, the feeling of being intoxicated occurs...), it didn't for others (After 18 shots, will be posioned by alcohol and a very high chance of being in comatose.)

Judge 1

Positives: The lighting was even throughout the piece. The music supported the piece and the overall flow of the visuals.

Improvements: The facts throughout the piece were not cited and appear to be inaccurate. There were several grammatical errors in the text on the screen and the wording of the call to action. The time for several of the frames could have been extended due to the larger amount of text on screen.

Judge 2

Positives: The cups help create a visual image of how much is too much. The text worked well to inform the viewer of the statistics.

Improvements: Another visual element would have brought this up a level, something like stop motion or another creative way to tell the story. A narrator could have helped.

Judge 3

Positives: Good concept and information. Important message.

Improvements: Needed more visual power to support strong message. Blue background didn't do it.

Judge 4

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