Hershey’s Kiss - ID# 268
Homewood-Flossmoor
Commercial
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hershey kiss
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- 4/28 8:17 am - What I Loved: Great song selection and use of lighting. You did a nice job highlighting a product that is very small and putting it in focus! Areas of Growth: Some of the shots were a little shaky- the pans across the hands or the shots of the wrapper. These were a bit distracting. Using a tripod to get these pans and tilts can take a lot of practice and trial and error! Keep working at it! In a future cut of this project, I would love to hear some natural audio. There was a sound effect of the girl being "excited" to eat the Hershey kiss. It was a little soft and hard to hear, but I would LOVE to hear more audio like this throughout the project. Could those wrappers be producing any crinkling noises? Not sure if you need the two logos in closing shot. I would just use one and make it bigger since they are both saying the same thing!
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