This is a video about how to make a dessert charcuterie board. Music: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=deEaqnsvc7U&t=23s
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Positives: Well done story and clear to follow steps of process. Good combo of caption and narration. Good editing and graphics.
Improvements: Some shots could have been tighter.
Positives: Strong tracking shot at the start of the video to show what the end product should look like. Good job of laying out the process from the start. You do a good job of showing the whole process and have some good edits in the video.
Improvements: When editing the cuts between the fruits make sure that there are not any lighting changes or camera movements. Try to use a few more angles to show more detail. Overall I like the angles you use, but think there could be more.
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