Girls In Business News Package - ID# 308
York
News Package
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A News Package about the new Girls In Business club at York Community High School. The club was started this year by four senior girls.
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- 4/29 8:52 am - This is a great story ideas. The concept works, but the fact that it is mostly meetings footage make it hard. Avoid having anyone introduce themselves, as that is what her name key would be for. The energy of the reporter voice could be stronger here (also audio quality seems hollow). The interviews are interesting and informative.
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