A demonstration of how to bake delicious French macarons from scratch. Music courtesy of: "Chic Magnet" by Dar Golan https://www.dargolan-free.com/world-music
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Positives: Good graphics. Good story and idea.
Improvements: Narrator spoke too quickly and hard to understand in some places. Camera shot could have been tighter.
Positives: Great job with the graphics at 12 seconds to display the names of the macaron. I am not sure if many people know those are names for a part of a macron. Good job showing the peaks and making sure that the viewer knows what you are talking about when you reference them Great job on this project.
Improvements: Try to incorporate more angles of shots for this video. When showing the sifter go in closer on it and get a good close-up of it. Try to avoid a zoom in or out shot. They are not needed in a situation like this. Set the shot and then just edit it to that shot. It will look smoother.
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