Losin' It - ID# 335
Back of the Yards College Prep
Music Video
Entry Description
A music video featuring an original song by Uriel Reyes.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/28 4:14 pm - Love when I see original music. Would suggest adjusting the lighting in the singer shots (0:35). Good pacing.
- 2/24 8:39 am - Great job using an original song. Nice job editing to the pace of the music. For black and white I would recommend stronger contrast and better lighting. Some of the shots are dark and/or mostly gray or black.
Judge 1
Positives: The editing moves well. There are a couple of very cool shots like the game pieces falling.
Improvements: The vocals need to be in tune. The vocalist needs to articulate more clearly. The entire mix can benefit from more reverb.
Judge 2
Positives: The song is terrific, and that shot of playing the keyboard in sync was super-effective. I liked the choice of black and white as well.
Improvements: A lot of the video was repetitive, which is ok given that the song doesn't build to much of a climax, but you could have used more visual variety. The lighting and compositions could have been more interesting as well.
Judge 3
Positives: I liked the way the black and white worked with the song. Good mood creator. The song itself was also great. Worked well with the visuals and there was a good variety of things to see.
Improvements: Could have used some more story under the images. Hard to keep attention throughout. The out of focus shots seemed a little unnecessary. And some of the shots were too long. Everything could have used some tightening up actually. But overall, a good effort!
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