HPHS Field Hockey Promo - ID# 336
Highland Park
School Promotion
Entry Description
Join the HPHS Girls Field Hockey team for their senior night as they compete against Evanston Township High School.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/25 10:40 am - Good job creating studio shots to promote Senior night. Including TEXT to focus the piece at the beginning might have made the opening hook more dynamic. Music adds good energy; the pace of the editing is fairly regular which isn't very fast. Mixing the clip length could create more energy. Choose your opening shot more carefully--either use a different take of the same shot, or choose another clip. Steady camerawork, but needs more shot variety to engage the viewer. Cool blue lighting--nice touch!
- 4/8 12:56 pm - 0:01 girl on far right not fully in frame; great call to action at the end with the game time and location; way to keep the focus on the girls
- 3/7 10:11 am - Nice job showcasing the team and getting the school hyped! I like the dark background and the lighting on the athletes. Very cool!
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