Egg Harbor Comes to Town - ID# 343
Deerfield
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Entry Description
In a nondescript suburban mall, restaurants can never seem to make it. Enter Egg Harbor. Music: "A Caper Story" by Martin Landstrom from Epidemic Sound "Racing Hearts "by Mattie Maquire from Epidemic Sound - licenses obtained through subscription
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- 4/29 8:27 am - The b-roll for this story is very good. You used a drone and it looks like a DSLR to make everything pop. I also love the pace in which you edited this. This is a cool little feature almost hiding as a news package. It felt like something I'd watch on "Chicago's Best" show (maybe that was your inspiration). I get your point about how local restaurants go out quickly, however, (Upper Crust, Il Forno, Tony's Subs, Golden Star, Italian Kitchen, Cherry Pit). Just make sure you're not super generalizing. I do like your use of graphics. Great job finding pics of the old places that used that spot. I will say this piece at times seemed a little more about showcasing the reporter rather than servicing the story. This is a new and emerging (and compelling) ways of grabbing viewers, but it also can feel canned and cheesy if not done well. Feels strange a bit to do this interview at night.
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