Goldfish Commercial - ID# 350

Maine West
Commercial

Entry Description

This is a commercial for Goldfish.

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Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/28 5:14 pm - What I Loved: Very impressive use of stop motion animation. I love the little swords you used and all of the paper cut outs and drawings you used to tell this story. I can’t imagine how long this took to create. Your story of having goldfish and cheeseItz go to war is very unique! You did a great job using sound effects to help tell your story without dialogue. Areas of Growth: Your story idea was so creative that I would love for you to add a creative slogan to go with it! How could you tie in the war and goldfish winning with a reason to buy Goldfish?
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