Highland Park Public Library Commercial - ID# 372
Highland Park
Commercial
Entry Description
This is a commercial showcasing the Highland Park Public Library. It demonstrates all of the resources and advantages that are available to its members and the ordinary public.
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- 4/28 7:55 am - What I Loved: One of the biggest strengths of this commercial is the amount of new information you deliver to your viewers! I don't think a lot of people know how many different ways you can use a library and its resources. I love that you have included a QR code for users to make this interactive as well as the phone number. As a viewer, I walked away wanting to visit this library! Areas of Growth: Some of the shots were shaky which was distracting to viewers. I know that I don't have all of the fancy equipment to be able to capture the perfect moving shot. One thing you could do in this scenario is try borrowing a chair with wheels or cart from the library to help you with some of these. I saw some in the shot with the student in the media room! It may take a few tries and some friends to help you to nail this shot, but it would definitely help to elevate this project.
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