AeroKnife Mock Commercial - ID# 405
Riverside Brookfield
Comedic Narrative
Entry Description
This is a comedic narrative that mocks late night infomercial products and hosts.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/27 9:14 am - This seemed like a lot of fun to both film and produce, you had a nice idea and seemed to execute a lot of jokes effectively. My advice is to slow down with your planning and figure out some more specific jokes and narrative pieces to keep things moving rather than focusing on one joke that carries throughout. Your audio and lighting were excellent and your edits were a lot of fun as well, keep practicing and writing and producing, you're on the right track.
- 2/24 3:01 pm - STORY: The commercial parody is okay, but it wasn’t substantial enough to be a successful comedy. CAMERA: limited camera with the in-studio look. EDITING: Not much to say about editing; you cut to bars and then back to show the guy after presumably stabbing the witness in the studio. LIGHTING: studio lighting was good AUDIO: primary audio was clear, nice use of police sirens in the background toward the end. The music bed was appropriately cheesy like an infomercial.
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