Military Sexual Assault PSA - ID# 418
Riverside Brookfield
Public Service Announcement
Entry Description
Eva Marie Duff a young woman, vetern, and mother shares her heartbreaking story of sexual assault.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/23 1:08 pm - This topic is revelant, having her share her story was so key. I'm gald she was willing to speak about it. Your messaging was shared well, having the statistics come up in between what she was sharing was a good spot to have it. I thought the amount of clips you had and b roll was good for what you were sharing.
Judge 1
Positives: The message and call to action were clear and strong throughout this piece. The use of photos supported the speaker. The mix of narration and music was balanced.
Improvements: Having a second camera with a different angle of the speaker could have elevated the piece. The voiceover at the end for the call to action did not seem to fit well with the overall feel of the piece.
Judge 2
Positives: Having a survivor on camera was very effective and moving. The few photos helped connect with the subject.
Improvements: The audio mix seemed a little off as I heard loud dialogue only in the left speaker. THe end V.O. could have been cleaned up.
Judge 3
Positives: Good idea with live interview. Important message.
Improvements: Audio of interviewee drowned out with loud music. Couldn't hear her. Lost story because of that issue.
Judge 4
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