Alumni Success Stories - ID# 412

Riverside Brookfield
School Promotion

Entry Description

Alumni Ellie Bergstrom is interviewed via Zoom about her work in Marine Science after graduating from RB.

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  • 4/26 8:51 am - Interesting story! Editing note: Once you've done a lower third, you generally don't need to repeat it. Good attempt at shot variety over zoom, but there's still too much talking head A-roll. When she talks about things at RB, it would have been nice to have current B-roll footage to lay over the interview. If this was produced during remote learning, that would have been impossible; however, it could have been added this past fall when everyone returned to school.
  • 4/8 1:01 pm - Great intro- graphics & music; way to incorporate well-framed shots with the interview; great variety & use of graphics throughout
  • 3/7 1:43 pm - That was very interesting and I like the idea of having segments about Alumni Success Stories for students to hear about how graduates do in life. You did a great job filming this and the lighting was done well.
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