"Love is in the Air" - ID# 433
New Trier
School Promotion
Entry Description
2022 MMEA School Promo Entry
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/25 8:19 am - Fun concept--nice use of the casual conversation vibe. B-roll walking and pan shot works well to clarify the location. There's some shot variety, but could have used more. However, the story isn't about purchasing spirit wear. You needed something to show what they can buy--rose, chocolates. Video or graphics of those items would have clarified the promo. The spot ends abruptly--needs a closing. The music fits the theme, but it's copyrighted music.
- 4/8 12:51 pm - Background music fits theme of video- great B Roll going through the store- seemed to end abruptly; maybe include graphic of rose/chocolates people can purchase, or the store's hours and location as a call to action so your audience knows exactly what they need to do
- 3/7 8:59 am - I really enjoyed your opening and the music! It was very comedic and I like how you appeared to be making a purchase and did a quick turn around to talk to the camera! Great way to open!
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