Vanish - ID# 455

Glenbrook South

Seven Day Challenge

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Entry Description

Three friends find a mysterious VHS tape at a crime scene. They go on a journey to return the tape to its rightful place.

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Judge 1

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Judge 2

Positives: I liked all the use of sound effects and music as it fit nicely. There were plenty of camera angles and covered all the scenes well and were nicely balanced and mostly in focus.

Improvements: At times some of the lighting was harsh. I don't believe this was intentional but the scene where they acquire the tape, it looks like you lost your sunlight as it was sunny at the start of the scene then night time by the end.

Judge 3

Positives: Terrific execution throughout. Enjoyed the attention to detail throughout the production. Pacing was excellent especially in how you incorporated sound throughout.

Improvements: None

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