A pair of friends, one being easily distractible and the other fed up with his nonsense, find themselves in a predicament when they trespass on someone else’s property. Music Source(s) Title and youtube link preferred ”Sneaky Background Music for videos”: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I2m1h0ALpY4 “Spy Background Music for Videos” https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cfTonxlUiA0 “Synthwave Retro Mix” https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rz5RxMcpG3I “80s SynthwaveRetro Electro Wave” https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p6GhDMnKu3o
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Positives: Nice job masking the VHS footage onto the TV. The over-exposed shot of outside the garage actually works and plays on the light vs dark and makes the hero look superior.
Improvements: The lighting mixed with camera settings in the garage could have been manipulated more to make the mood seem more creepy. Additional music under-bead in the garage while searching for tools to escape with could have also helped motivate the tension of the scene.
Positives: This was a fun piece highlighted by solid production execution and enjoyable performances. The incorporation of sound also added to the experience and helped make this a fun watch.
Improvements: The story could have been developed a bit more. I wish we would have been introduced to Mr. Groovy a little sooner and had him impact the story a bit more.
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