Reversal - ID# 459
Homewood-Flossmoor
Seven Day Challenge
Entry Description
An unexpected date turns ugly for an bad man.
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Judge 1
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Judge 2
Positives: Use of sound effects and music worked well for this piece. The camera shots all seemed to be in focus and balanced well.
Improvements: Not sure if this was intentional, but at the start of the video, the sound effects of shoveling did not match the video of shoveling. Not sure if the VHS tapes purpose come across, other than seeing them I don't think the viewer understands what they are and how it ties to the story.
Judge 3
Positives: Main character is believeable as the psycho he portrays. Loved how you captured him visually to enhance the suspense. Production was very strong.
Improvements: I wish we could have gotten more backstory on to why he is the way he is. We see that is he is disturbed but why? What life influences led him to be like this. Same with the girl, after her heroic move in the end, it would have been interesting to see how she reacted to the prediciment she was out into and forced to respond to.
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