Man In the Mirror - ID# 451

Lyons Township

Seven Day Challenge

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Entry Description

A short film about a guy who tries to impress his crush and fit in with a new group of friends...but everything goes terribly wrong.

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Judge 1

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Judge 2

Positives: The lighting fit the mood for each indoor scene and all the actors were in focus and light appropriately. Camera work was really well in terms of angles, depth of focus, composition, etc.

Improvements: Some of the actor dialog audio could have been gained up in certain parts. Outside shots the sky was really over exposed, ways around it would be to shoot a little tighter or away from the sky, later in the evening, or if available a neutral density filter.

Judge 3

Positives: It was great to see a comedy that was executed this well! Loved the story and the buildup, performances were terrific and shot choices were excellent throughout. This was a fun and enjoyable watch.

Improvements: When the main character is fumbling with the remote to get the video off the screen, I wish we saw a reaction shot from Stacy to his embarassing video performance. We see how everyone else on the couch reacts, would love to have seen her response to this embarassing moment.

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