Agent 228 - ID# 453

Oak Forest

Seven Day Challenge

---

Entry Description

When a student needs help Agent 228 is there to save the day.

Copyright Info

Recent Teacher Comments

Judge 1

Positives: Liked the agent 228 character idea for a high school vignette - though I though he was going to be a tutor Nice camera work on running scenes

Improvements: Need more screen time on text shots so people can actually read them and understand what's supposed to be happening in the story. The tall student as Dad was confusing The shovel was odd - he's not really digging, and how did the Mom get it from agent's trunk?

Judge 2

Positives: Editing was really nice and flowed together well. The story seemed to be pretty clear.

Improvements: Some of the camera shots were too shallow depth that they also appeared to be out of focus. Lighting could have been used a little more, It mostly appears to be room lighting.

Judge 3

Positives: Enjoyed the concept and how you incorporated so many characters purposefully in this dynamic story. I thought it was clever how you set it up and provided a satisfying resolution.

Improvements: A couple time the focus was a little soft and the sound was a bit inconsistent.

Judge 4

Positives:

Improvements: