Movie Night - ID# 464

Back of the Yards College Prep

Seven Day Challenge

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Entry Description

3 friends plan a relaxing night of watching old movies together... until things get deadly.

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Judge 1

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Judge 2

Positives: Good use of the noise grain and "Play" graphic to have the feel of watching an old VHS. I like the ending shot of the dirt falling on the hand as that was a nice shot to end on with the camera as a POV angle.

Improvements: Actor dialog was almost inaudible. As for the story, I am a little confused to the motivation of the killing. The VHS tape was put in and it seemed that the two actors were already prepared for the middle actor to leave, so they kill him then begin to bury him outside, but it seems to be lacking what the intent was and how the VHS had anything to do with it.

Judge 3

Positives: The concept has possibility.

Improvements: This clearly needs to be developed much more. This is more like a movie trailer than an actual film. No character development or story arc.

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