Two and a Half Thieves - ID# 465
Vernon Hills
Seven Day Challenge
Entry Description
A trio of hilarious thieves attempt to steal an artifact from a university, but chaos ensues as their heist goes awry.
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Judge 1
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Judge 2
Positives: Audio of the actors were decent and mixed well. Story was clear and got the point across.
Improvements: At the dinner table scene, one of the actors was talking but we never got a clear shot till later of him talking. Watch for reflections as at one point I saw the camera and operator in the dinner table scene. A lot of the lighting was just natural light and didn't really contribute well to the mood of the scene.
Judge 3
Positives: Enjoyed the concept and the execution was solid througout. Performances really added to the dynamic and the technical execution was excellent throughout.
Improvements: Although I enjoyed the concept at times I think it dragged a little bit. Some of the unecessary dialogue could have been trimmed to get to the resolution in a more timely manner.
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