The Last Time - ID# 461

Lake Forest
Seven Day Challenge

Entry Description

Music copyright free: "It had to be you" Isham Jones 1924 Credits music by student Alex McDowell

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Judge 1

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Judge 2

Positives: I really liked the use of the adult actors as it really played with the realism of the story. The camera shots all looked great and balanced well!

Improvements: The beginning bedroom scene, audio transition of actor dialog could have been transitioned better with dissolves or have room tone underneath to help blend the audio.

Judge 3

Positives: Terrific story and execution all around. Storytelling, Production, and acting were all top notch. I was even impressed how you incorporated a little levity in this otherwise serious story with the uncle trying to move the piano with the shovel. Heartfelt story that most people can relate to, fantastic job!

Improvements: None.

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