7 DAY CHALLENGE SPLIT ENDS - ID# 463

Riverside Brookfield

Seven Day Challenge

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Riverside Brookfield High School

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Judge 1

Positives: Liked the swinging camera effect and the lighting effect in basement. Good mix between voice and music.

Improvements: I found this piece to be very unclear overall, and a bit longer than necessary.

Judge 2

Positives: The music worked well to keep with the eerie feeling, and editing worked well with the whip pan transitions and layering the sounds of the characters.

Improvements: Not sure if the black & white effect was practical or what the motivation was behind it. The characters talking sounded like it was recorded from the camera's mic instead of a boom or a hidden lav.

Judge 3

Positives: Good concept and at times very well executed. Pacing is consistent throughout and your performaces were solid.

Improvements: The resolution could be better. Sound needs to be panned throughout and it was very soft in some places.

Judge 4

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