Jarritos Commercial - ID# 49

Glenbrook South

Commercial

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Entry Description

Smooth flowing product commercial for Jarritos soda. Music rights from Epidemic Sound.

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Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/29 8:10 am - What I Loved: I loved your use of audio throughout this project- the clinking of the bottle cap, splashing of the water, pouring of the soda all made me feel like I was in this scene with you, about to drink a Jarritos. I also liked how many of these sound effects were timed to cuts in your video. You chose to highlight several different flavors. The Jarritos bottle itself is nothing fancy, but using all the flavors added color to this commercial! Areas of Growth: This was an impressive commercial and finding areas of improvement was difficult for me! One thing I would have loved to have seen was a bigger version of the Jarritos logo in your closing shot. Otherwise, outstanding!

Judge 1

Positives: Clear narrative on refreshment an appetite appeal, good energy, very nice audio mix. Nice music choice.

Improvements: There seems to be a little haze over some shots - maybe a color filter? Feels like that tamps down the look - crisper and brighter might be better. Consider some kind of tagline to anchor the intended message.

Judge 2

Positives: Good camera and slo mo Animation was clean and sharp Excellent work

Improvements: Last product shot was dark Logo could have been bigger at end

Judge 3

Positives: I thought this was great fun. You made soda look like a much more expensive enticing product. I like how you demonstrated the flavor and made sure we heard and saw things that would make our mouths water. Story, Camera and Sound are all great!

Improvements: For the most part the lighting and editing were good. My biggest issue is that the color of the soda did not seem right. I'm not sure were things went off, but its a simply fix that will surely be worth the effort.

Judge 4

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