Titan Football - ID# 50

Glenbrook South
School Promotion
Entry Description

Promotional video for the Glenbrook South High School Varsity Football team. Music rights from Epidemic Sound

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Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/28 8:39 am - Opening Titles-- not sure why there is FOOTBALL, then Titan Football. Seems like an error. Fun camera movement in the studio shots! But your "story" feels like 2 separate stories in one timeline: first half, second half. Integrate the studio shots with the game footage, use ONE music bed and I think your story would be elevated. Needs a closing--this video just ends.
  • 4/8 1:58 pm - Great into graphics & use of special effects; way to keep the blue and yellow colors consistent; added fluidity. Great into graphics & use of special effects; way to keep the blue and yellow colors consistent; added fluidity
  • 3/7 3:03 pm - Great job portraying your team and then clips of some of their key moments of the season. I like the dark background and how it looked with the uniforms. It was very sharp. I also liked the lightening bolts. It made it more interesting to me, the viewer. Song choice was great for a football team as well
Judge 1

Positives: enjoyed editing technique of electricity unique shots in studio

Improvements: stronger storyline voices of players could help to accentuate coming season

Judge 2

Positives: The opening/introduction works very well. Some planning went into creating that. There is a good variety of shots. The lighting and color quality is excellent. The editing is paced well.

Improvements: Things slow down after the first 22 seconds. Consider shooting a variety of camera angles and setups (Closeups and medium shots as well as long shots). Once you have that footage you will be able to do quicker cuts that will help bring the audience into the action of Titan Football. That will also help sustain the pacing and interest that you created in the first half.

Judge 3

Positives: good lighting and movement with the camera. Good closeup shots and strong use of effects. There is a good chance for a strong ending with e TD celebration or some natural sound from the announcer saying Titans Touchdown or Titans win. Try to add that to the end of the video. It will make it even stronger and create a connection.

Improvements: There is an audio drop at 32 seconds which I am not sure why it is there. Try intersperse the clips with the solos, there is no need to have it be two separate parts that I can think of. Show the player, then show a great play by them.

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