Iphone Commercial 2022 - ID# 59
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Commercial
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Iphone Commercial 2022 Copyright-free music provided by SoundStripe Subscription.
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- 4/29 8:00 am - What I Loved: I like how you incorporated so many unique and colorful shots taken from your iPhone. I really liked the one of the girl taking a video in the mirror. This was colorful and artistic and the music you selected helped to set that tone as well. Areas of Growth: I really like the tagline that you used at the end of the commercial as it tied all of your shots together in a central theme. However, it was a little hard to read at the very bottom of the screen. I'm not sure if this is something that Apple always does, but you might want to move it more center and make it larger so no one misses it! The second shot of the iphone moving in the air seemed to lag a little bit and wasn't as smooth as the first.
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