Lost PSA - ID# 64

Huntley

Public Service Announcement

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Entry Description

Public Service Announcement showcasing the importance of being careful when leashing your dogs / taking care of pets properly

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Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/6 12:46 pm - The story here was concise and came across well on screen (poor little puppers). I thought that more of a focus could have been placed on the loose knot (a close-up) and possibly seeing the aleash come loose. Your end message/call to action could have been even more specific about leashing, if that's what the message is geared towards.

Judge 1

Positives: The story was clear and well conveyed through a series of events. The variety in camera shots to signify what was happening worked well with the piece. This was a unique topic as well.

Improvements: This piece could have benefited from more creativity in lighting and transitions. Nature sound was used at the start of the piece but nowhere else so it seemed out of place. There could have been a more clear call to action at the end as well.

Judge 2

Positives: The writing and direction, coming back to the elements from before the dog disappeared, is excellent The cinematography, music and sound were very cinematic.

Improvements: I wish the dog would have been reunited with the owner and the ending wasn't so sad, but that is part of the message!

Judge 3

Positives: Strong and important message. Well done story. Good use of graphics and music.

Improvements: Ended rather abruptly. Good pace was lost at end.

Judge 4

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