In 1 minute, the negative impact of social media is uncovered through this public service announcement.
Positives: The use of picture-turns-video was a creative transition from the social media feed into the video which also supported the message. The use of music supported the piece. The lighting was even throughout as well.
Improvements: There was no clear call to action or resources at the end of the piece (ie mental health maybe?). There could have been more variety of shots or quicker shots throughout the piece or the doley shot could have been one continuous shot.
Positives: The transition from phone to real life was great. The build up of creepy music worked!
Improvements: The shaky camera could have been improved. There could be a sound at teh beginning as it starts silent and builds up.
Positives: Good idea. Like opening shot, very effective.
Improvements: Story needed to be stronger. Couldn't really tell what was going on. Writing on mirror hard to read.
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