York Dukes Football - Week 3 Trailer - ID# 1

York

School Promotion

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Entry Description

The York Dukes (2-0) take on Morton High School in a game to continue their undefeated and historic season. This video showcases footage from the previous game to create a promotional trailer for this highly anticipated game.

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Recent Teacher Comments

Judge 1

Positives: great use of music and voices of players switch to color was exciting

Improvements: player voices stopped in the middle section.... score flashed to add drama to previous game recap

Judge 2

Positives: Good use of natural sound at the start of the video. Good job with the color transition. Stong job of keeping the clips short and the pacing is quick. Great choice of music. The nat sound continues all video long and just makes the piece much better. Good job with the camera angles and the slowdown and ramp-ups during the whole video.

Improvements: Shot at 29 seconds is hard to determine what it is. I think it is a person in a wheelchair, but not sure. If it is then that would add to emotion if it was clearer. I later see the young man in the wheelchair but do not know the connection. I like the use of the shots, but more of the story would help, a connection to the team. With the heartbeat it is a perfect time to make an edit, look to use that natural beat as a chance to edit.

Judge 3

Positives: The piece was truly outstanding, and I was thoroughly impressed with the filmmaker's masterful storytelling and the seamless transition from black and white to color. The suspenseful nature of the piece kept me engaged and excited the whole time.

Improvements: I think it could have a little better color correction. It seemed oversaturated in a few shots. I was confused by the ending text as well. I wasn't sure what Week 3 meant. Perhaps adjust the text on the screen for different audiences.

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