Seeker - ID# 121
Homewood-Flossmoor
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Entry Description
When two friends pull over they find a young women dead. After calling the police they decided to wait, later to find out she wasn't actually dead.
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- 4/23 6:51 pm - POSITIVES: Opening 2 shots are great, but in Shot 3 it's obviously a body...and the heroes aren't sure it's a body? You lost your momentum there. AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: Story inconsistencies: she's caught by a villain @:37, then by :40 she's in frame alone screaming for her friend to run. Clips seem like they are all part of a single sequence because they are all at the same location. Some tension is built about the attack on the boy, and then perhaps his impending demise at the end... missing the part of the story arc when they notice that the dead body isn't on the pavement any more. Perhaps needed a location with opportunities for hiding & being hunted... the setting is pretty much the same for most of the shots.
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