We are LT! - ID# 13
Lyons Township
School Promotion
Entry Description
A promotional video highlighting some of our school service projects and the spirit of our students.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/25 2:55 pm - You have some great footage and you definitely showed a lot of variety to the school. I loved the pace and the attention to various elements of the school as well, really showcased all your school has to offer. One area to improve is that your titles could match your pace and style of editing, as they appear pretty basic and straight from the templates available while you have this crisp and exciting pace to your edit. Overall, nice work. Keep up the good work.
- 4/10 1:22 pm - Pros - You do a great job showcasing all of the things you have going on at LT. I enjoyed the variety of activities you included in your video. Your shots were very clear and showcased a lot of what was happening at the respective highlighted events. I sure hope that one cheerleader at the end is alright! Cons - I think you could have utilized more camera shot changes. You had many shots set up with the standard wide shot
Judge 1
Positives: great view of all service projects spirit was very evident
Improvements: more specifics given on money raised, number of people helped, etc.. narrative voice could have given some added impact
Judge 2
Positives: This video makes LT seem like a great place to go to school. With all of the activities and school spirit, students are getting a great high school experience. This is what a strong promotional video does. I like the variety of shots that you use and the way you put the viewer in the video by placing them in the student section. Great use of natural sound in this video so we can hear what is going on.
Improvements: A couple of the shots had some weird framing which made it hard to see what was happening. The start of Secret Santa is one of them and at 1:10 as well. I think that there could be fewer student section crowd shots, but not a lot. I think there is two back-to-back at basketball, and one of them could be removed. The key to editing is keeping your best stuff in your video.
Judge 3
Positives: It's wonderful to see the majority of teams and activities at the schooll, and it was truly enlightening to learn about all of them. Additionally, there was a diverse range of footage captured, which added great value to the overall video. Keep up the great work!
Improvements: As you continue to develop your editing skills, you might consider refining the timing of your cuts to match the rhythm of the music. Additionally, using a tripod or stabilizer can be a helpful tool to eliminate any shakiness in your shots and further enhance the professional quality of your work.
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