Environmental PSA - ID# 135
Homewood-Flossmoor
Public Service Announcement
Entry Description
PSA about environmental concerns
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/22 2:03 pm - Creative combination of child’s voice and heartbeat to flatline. Ending credit could have transitioned slightly smoother, but overall really well done.
- 3/6 6:10 pm - I like that you used the child's voice and laughter and the sound of a heartbeat. Then continued with her hopes and dreams while showing us what our world is turning into. Powerful.
Judge 1
Positives: The shots were visually stimulating and there was a lot of detail in each of them. The use of the heartbeat/pulse sound effect added to the tone of the piece. The ending graphic was relevant to the message.
Improvements: There needed to be a clearer call to action on what the viewer could do. The piece could have benefited from a wider variety of shots and there could have been more context in how the shots tied together. The child's voice was a great idea but it could have been edited to be more smooth or softer to work better with the message.
Judge 2
Positives: Good message, strong and contrasting words with images. Like child actor. Good music.
Improvements: A bit simple with some images. Could have used even strong contrast.
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