Goose Poop - ID# 136
Homewood-Flossmoor
News Package
Entry Description
News story about a goose poop issue affecting students' walk between classes.
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- 4/27 7:53 am - Interesting topic. Good composition on the people being interviewed but they should be looking off to the side, not directly at the camera. Also, the reporter should be centered on camera. The music really does not fit in this piece. It is not a hard, hard news story, but I think it is more than a human interest story.
- 3/6 11:55 pm - I really liked how thorough the coverage of this piece was. The reporter had a nice, conversational tone, which also kept this piece very light hearted!
- 3/5 9:38 am - This could have been a fun creative piece but her tone doesn't match the fun. They made it sound like a news pkg. Music also doesn't really hit the tone. Good shots, love the visuals, especially the aerial views.
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