Maine East High School Presents: Stupid School Play-by-Play! - ID# 137
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Top Announcers Jonathan Mathew and Quintin Lasky are here to bring you the latest and greatest play-by-play for all of the mundane activities of your daily school schedule!
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- 4/28 1:46 am - Fun and creative take on traditional play by play and commentary. Audio is a little blown out at times. Reign it in a bit. Lots of quick cuts and edits. Well done.
- 4/26 9:03 am - Nice satirical presentation of a couple sports broadcast types hyping what you describe as something "mundane" You've got multiple shots and edits. I like how you've used the testing center and within the short narrative introduced this as a place to retake a test or catch up on missing work, etc. It's a nice subtle way to reinforce students to take advantage of that space and opportunity to take a test, etc. Some additional positivity with the results of taking the exam. I think this would play well as a short PSA for the testing center and the benefit of using it. The spin with the stereotypical sports announcers could be appealing to athletes and perhaps capture a specific audience. Good idea and executed well!
Judge 1
Positives: Very cute idea! The voice over was very clever and delivered with great comedic timing. Good sequencing and story telling.
Improvements: Would have liked a few more tight shots, without the fades in between. A shot of her face as she says "yes" when she passes would have matched the tone of the video well. The voice over sounds like you blew out your mic.
Judge 2
Positives: Nice variety of camera angles. The story is quick and flows well.
Improvements: I would have changed the name of "Stupid School." It isn't a good representation of the school. It would have been nice to see the two reporters come back at the end for a quick closing remark.
Judge 3
Positives: Nice audio dubbing
Improvements: A bit plain
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