Soldier 76 - ID# 146
Homewood-Flossmoor
Movie Trailer
Entry Description
A cinematographic Sci-Fi teaser trailer
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/23 6:35 pm - POSITIVES: The last 10 seconds was really compelling! Great pacing that built tension and was supported by the music! AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: The constant voiceover narrative took away from presenting the story. Allowing dynamic visuals with pauses in the voiceover, or the voiceover condensed to "bullet points" would have been more effective in communicating the story and building suspense. More of the pacing creating in the last 10 minutes would have helped.
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