Football Promo made for HF going into state
Positives: close up shots music and vocals of player action created excitement
Improvements: narrative could have been better explaining road to state longer shots could have created more excitement to see plays develop
Positives: Great job transitioning to the music, love the pause. Good job of matching the beat and getting a nice variety of game shots and crowd shots. This is a really good way to pump up the student body for the next game in the playoffs. Stong use of natural sound is used in the whole video. The cuts in action are well done, and make the video compelling and action-packed.
Improvements: I wish the opening shot was not a dissolve and just a cut. I am not saying it does not work I just like that look more.
Positives: I was a huge fan of this piece and loved how you used the music to build the story and build the team as a character. I felt like I was watching a TNF recap video. I see an incredible future for this filmmaker working in sports& and/or live-action cinematography. I also love the pacing and how perfect the editing was for every major beat of the music.
Improvements: A great suggestion to enhance this piece would be to showcase the players in various settings beyond just the field. While the current footage is fantastic, it would be amazing to see them in their daily routines, such as in the gym or in the locker room. This would give us a more personal and intimate look into their lives, allowing us to connect with them on a deeper level.
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