Pack The House - ID# 141
Homewood-Flossmoor
School Promotion
Entry Description
Hype promo for HF Pack the House Nite
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/25 2:52 pm - You have some great editing here, especially showing so much content in a small amount of time. However, you have too many switches, I think, which made it a bit hard to follow. Overall, you have some really cool shots, great music editing, and neat transitions along with the dual- layering editing. Nice job overall!
- 3/14 9:28 am - Pros - Great editing and camera shots on your video. I loved the concept of including both boys' and girls' teams in one video. Your editing to make this happen was incredible and very well done. The way you incorporated different lighting and scenes being limited to the environment of a basketball court was great. The tracking shots you had were great as well. The way you kept incorporating shots side by side between both teams was impressive editing. Cons - I would say the video itself was a bit long. Because you are trying to promote people to come to see both boys’ and girls’ games, I would say a minute in length can help keep the attention of the viewer.
Judge 1
Positives: liked the picture in picture technique used liked the four images and use of juxtaposition of player action with coaches
Improvements: who were they playing for pack the place? would this have an impact on fans in the stands? went a little long and felt a bit repetitive by the end
Judge 2
Positives: I like the split image to promote both programs. I think that is a creative idea that shows the value for both teams. Great job on the transition at :26 seconds. Stong variety of shots during this video, which helps make it interesting. I really like the use of the coaches and the huddles for this video.
Improvements: I think there are some shots that could be removed to speed this up and make it even more impactful. After the tip make every shot after it faster to set a strong pace. I am not sure if you intended to do this but Nite is spelled incorrectly. If you did then fine, but always look to have things spelled correctly.
Judge 3
Positives: The video exhibited a plethora of remarkable shots and cinematography. These were complemented by impressive editing techniques that skillfully manipulated the perspective and timeline. The video also had a nice range of imagery.
Improvements: The audio production could have been more diverse and engaging by integrating various sound effects, including the players' voices from the game. Additionally, the video duration could have been reduced to avoid redundancy and maintain viewer engagement.
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