Pressure Rises - ID# 163
Homewood-Flossmoor
News Package
Entry Description
Sports cover story on Homewood-Flossmoor outfielder Dillon Head's rising stock ahead of the 2023 MLB draft.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/6 9:47 am - Interesting story. You should attribute the b-roll that you do not shoot so we know where it came from. Did you shoot any of the b-roll? Player composition is great. The coach is looking above the camera and we can see the mic cable. We should not see it.
- 3/6 9:45 pm - Great footage/highlights of the player-can tell the reporter was well informed on the topic! The story could have maybe included more conversation with the actual player, as opposed to showing video footage of him playing
- 2/27 12:36 pm - Overall story was good but script was long.. graphics were good needed nats mic needed to be dressed Interviews were good Wanted to get to know more about the student himself.
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