How to make Slime - ID# 176

Neuqua Valley
Demonstration
Entry Description

A step-by-step process on how to make slime.

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Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/27 8:48 pm - Story: This was a good example of a vlog and demo. The story worked well, it was clear, showed the steps well, and followed the process. Having a variety of ways to make slime also was smart. The crunchy one was wild... Sound: Good use of diegetic sound, it was important for us to hear the types of slime, especially the crunchy and the fluffy slime. Camera/Lighting/editing: You used a variety of shots, which helped keep it engaging, and the it was pieced together well. Creative and interesting video!
  • 4/25 9:30 am - Story: Creatively conveys the step by step process. Sound: Good voice over, audio mix with music, and use of natural sound Camera: Good composition. Needed a more diverse range of camera shots, angles, and movements. Lighting: Excellent
  • 4/18 6:23 pm - Good use of Close-Up shots and fast editing at the beginning of the video to catch the viewer's attention. Good use of Close-Up shots and high angle shots as the process is explained. Music selection works well with the images that were recorded. Good use of dissolves. Good use of voice-overs. Very well done. Keep producing more videos.
Judge 1

Positives: Shots of slime coming together were good. Good use of sound with Crunch noises.

Improvements: Several segments were too dark. Host spoke fast and rushed sometimes.

Judge 2

Positives: I really like the camera movements and the way they help lead to the ingredients. I like the natural sound used during this video. It adds a nice layer to the video that takes it to another level Good job on the lighting and the framing of the shots. Good job showing a wide variety of ways to make the slime, while not missing a step. Great job on this video.

Improvements: The audio is much better on the voice-over than the on camera. Try to work to level those out and remove the echo. Also, on a video try to avoid the stick FCP effect. Challenge yourself to work on newer graphics. A video that is strong loses something when the graphics are canned.

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