How To Ask A Girl Out - ID# 179

Homewood-Flossmoor
Demonstration
Entry Description

Jasmine coaches Bryan on asking his crush to the dance.

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Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/27 9:20 pm - Story: This was funny. The steps were clear. "Not if you think you're worth a yes." That spoke to me. It spoke to me. Sound: The music choices were good and fit the tone of the different parts. Hide that microphone! Also, there was some wind and peaking happening, so just make sure you're placing your mics well, using filters, and monitoring it. Camera/editing: Shots were framed well. Lighting was a little over exposed in parts. But the editing came together well. This was a fun edit!
  • 4/24 10:32 am - Story: Humorous scriptwriting that was clear Sound: Audio work was good. Music choice was creative and enhanced the production. Some issues with audio. Camera: Camera work was good. Could have used a more diverse range of shots, angles, and movements. Lighting: Good use of natural lighting
  • 4/16 7:45 am - Music selections and transitions work well and are well edited. Good use of different camera angles. Performers in the video played their roles very well. Good camera movement when performers talked to the camera/audience. The script and dialogue were well written. Fun and creative idea. Very well done. Keep producing more videos.
Judge 1

Positives: Good interesting concept. Great acting and solid script. Clever.

Improvements: Som edits were off a bit. Lighting was too bright in places and sound had wind disruptions.

Judge 2

Positives: I like the premise of the script, and think there are some really good shots. I think that the graphics are used well to outline the steps and they make it easier to follow along for the viewer.

Improvements: It is hard to hear the male character in this video. Watch for the lighting changes due to the sun. The edit at 11 seconds seems a little strange. I liked the first shot enough to keep it. If it was due to a script error then just work to redo the whole scene. I see that he is wearing a mic on the side of the shirt. Work to avoid this. Really work on the sound. A video with an unbalanced sound makes it hard to follow.

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