The Wild Roaster - ID# 185
Deerfield
News Package
Entry Description
Committed to sustainability across the board, The Wild Roaster is local business committed to doing good - and bringing fresh roasted coffee to commuters and other customers.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/6 9:48 am - Good story. Nice b-roll. Audio is nice and clear but the owner’s level is a little lower than the others. Very predictable. Owner, b-roll, Owner, b-roll, Owner, b-roll, Owner, b-roll. Add more so we see the person talking for about 5-6 seconds and then just show b-roll back to back.
- 3/6 9:49 pm - Love the intro of the package- sound bites could have been edited together a little cleaner; some sound bites had clearer sound than others
- 2/27 12:41 pm - The top of the pkg started out good - the subject was interesting. The interviews were good and the shots were nice. Story was too long Soundbites were out of order.
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