Trailer for Bunnies Conquering - ID# 193

Morton East

Movie Trailer

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Movie Trailer for the Dramatic Narrative production of "Bunnies Conquering".

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• 4/23 3:53 pm - POSITIVES: I think you might have interesting story elements here to work with! AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: AUDIO is so low that it's almost unintelligible, which reduces the ability of the audio to set the vibe. Pace is so fast throughout that it's challenging to get a sense of the nature of the conflict. Because the pace is fast throughout, there is no build-up of tension.

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